Songs Made With GarageBand

[retrononomusic]

Hello,

I'm here to get some feedback about my homemade songs all done with GarageBand.

Here's 2 songs I put on Youtube recently :

It may sounds electronic, but the music was all done with an iPad. It becomes a useful tool for me when a melody comes into my mind and i'm not at home.

Could you tell me what you think of it, please?
Do the lyrics make sense?

Thanks by advance.

(Sorry about my french accent, I'm working on it)

Nono.